It's been along journey. I didn't expect that this book would take so much time. I'd written it a few years ago. So it should have been easy to bring it up to speed. Wrong.
I'd had this story assessed and the assessor suggested I take out a secondary plot as it was overshadowing the main plot. So I listened to her and removed a third of the story. Now I had gaping holes and I edited the first third pretty well but the rest of the manuscript was very raw. I had left it like that as I'd lost interest in fixing it up by then. This story gathered "dust" until I pulled it up on my screen mid last year.
Fast forward to today. I'm now ready to send the manuscript off to an editor. I have a cover in mind, finally, and will use the cover designer I previously used on the Deadly Caress to make the cover as eye catching as it can be and to convey what the reader can expect from the story inside.
What's next. I'm planning to change pace and go back to the fantasy trilogy, of which I've written two books and need to at the very least outline the third before I can go back and start polishing the first in the series.
Thursday, April 9, 2015
Wednesday, April 8, 2015
Friday, April 3, 2015
Sleep then my Princess - due for release mid 2015
Hi All
I'm happy to say that The Deadly Caress is selling reasonably well. I'm pleased so many people are finding my book entertaining. Thank you to those that have left great reviews.
My next thriller 'Sleep then my Princess' is due for release in about two months. I'm nearly finished the last round of edits. My writing buddy Victoria Chie was kind enough to go through the story with a red pen and outlined many flaws which I have now corrected. Hopefully, it's a coherent story now. If not, then it's all my fault.
I'll shortly send the manuscript off to an editor. Then it's back to me for another round of edits till I feel happy with it. I'm waiting for my cover designer to get back from holidays so he can create a great cover. This book has taken a lot longer to complete than I anticipated. Nevertheless, I've enjoyed the process. I ask myself what else would I be doing with my time? Shopping, enjoying the garden and more. Let's not go there.
All the best.
O.
I'm happy to say that The Deadly Caress is selling reasonably well. I'm pleased so many people are finding my book entertaining. Thank you to those that have left great reviews.
My next thriller 'Sleep then my Princess' is due for release in about two months. I'm nearly finished the last round of edits. My writing buddy Victoria Chie was kind enough to go through the story with a red pen and outlined many flaws which I have now corrected. Hopefully, it's a coherent story now. If not, then it's all my fault.
I'll shortly send the manuscript off to an editor. Then it's back to me for another round of edits till I feel happy with it. I'm waiting for my cover designer to get back from holidays so he can create a great cover. This book has taken a lot longer to complete than I anticipated. Nevertheless, I've enjoyed the process. I ask myself what else would I be doing with my time? Shopping, enjoying the garden and more. Let's not go there.
All the best.
O.
Tuesday, March 10, 2015
Wednesday, January 14, 2015
I've decided to post chapters of The Deadly Caress on Wattpad. Please read, enjoy and share with friends.
http://www.wattpad.com/library/OlgaOlha
Thanks for dropping by.
O.
http://www.wattpad.com/library/OlgaOlha
Thanks for dropping by.
O.
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Friday, January 2, 2015
2014 in Review
2014 went too fast for me. I published the Deadly Caress early in 2014. Being a first time author was a steep learning curve for me. Marketing is only one aspect of writing I'm learning as I go.
There are so many people I want to thank that helped me put that book onto Kindle. The first one is Victoria Chie, Max, Chris and Nicole and all my friends who helped with marketing.
I have to thank my readers for their reviews and encouragement.
The Deadly Caress wasn't an easy book to write and to hear that it was an easy read was heartening for me. It took many revisions to get it that way. Writing a book isn't a singular task. It takes a team of support people to assist along the way from editors, proofreaders and cover designers.
I plan to release my next thriller early 2015. I've been bogged down with scientific research on this one but loving it all the same.
On the reading front, I've manage to churn through many books this year. Some were amazing tomes and others, not so.
One of note is: Bloodgifted
Bloodgifted
Another is:
I hope you have a happy and prosperous 2015.
There are so many people I want to thank that helped me put that book onto Kindle. The first one is Victoria Chie, Max, Chris and Nicole and all my friends who helped with marketing.
I have to thank my readers for their reviews and encouragement.
The Deadly Caress wasn't an easy book to write and to hear that it was an easy read was heartening for me. It took many revisions to get it that way. Writing a book isn't a singular task. It takes a team of support people to assist along the way from editors, proofreaders and cover designers.
I plan to release my next thriller early 2015. I've been bogged down with scientific research on this one but loving it all the same.
On the reading front, I've manage to churn through many books this year. Some were amazing tomes and others, not so.
One of note is: Bloodgifted
Bloodgifted
Another is:
Agency Rules - Never an Easy Day at the Office
I hope you have a happy and prosperous 2015.
Friday, December 12, 2014
I went to the Freecon Futurian Sci Fi convention last Sunday 7th Dec 2014. (I do love reading and writing fantasy as well as thrillers. After my next thriller is published, I'll be finishing off my latest fantasy.) Not as big a turn up as I had been told. But still it was an interesting day. I was asked to read one chapter of The Deadly Caress. I know it's not sci fi or fantasy or horror but I thought it would be good to do this.
Garry Dalrymple has to be commended for all his hard work behind the scenes for this convention.
Here's part of the chapter I read out. Please note: Amanda Blake is the main character. Dorian - her newly discovered step-brother, Brian - her newly discovered twin and Jean - her newly discovered natural mother.
Excerpt from Chapter Four of The Deadly Caress
Amanda zipped up her raspberry-colored dress, and then stepped into her sandals, her thoughts centered on Dorian’s argument with Jean last night.
She recalled her mother’s words before Dorian strode away. ‘I’m sorry. I was going to tell you.’
Still wounded by Jean’s confession that she hadn’t been able to tell Murray she’d had twins, Amanda pulled aside the silk drapes, and the weak morning sun streamed in.
More than half of last night, she’d mulled over how it must have been for Jean faced with that decision. How could she begin to understand when she’d never had children?
That she blamed herself for the loss of her own unborn child at the age of twenty had been more than enough guilt for her to carry. It had been a horrific way to wake up to what she was doing to her body and start eating properly again.
From her bedroom, she could see a path curving from the veranda, past a winding narrow garden of mauve irises and white lilies; and at the cliff face, steps that disappeared downwards to the beach. Near the steps grew two Cypress pines that clung precariously to the rocky cliff face and leaned towards the restless, churning, water.
Even after last night’s incident, and the conflicting emotions that had brought her here, she was glad she’d come and been given the chance to meet her twin. Being part of a family again made her feel whole. She opened the window and heard the ocean crashing angrily against the rocks and the wind wooing as it skidded past the house.
No matter what the weather brought, she was looking forward to spending time with Brian.
A glance at the clock told her it was seven-thirty. She picked up her earrings from the French provincial dresser, had pushed one hoop in her lobe when she heard a scream.
The woman screamed again. Amanda opened the door and hurried toward the sound, which seemed to be coming from a room at the far end of the hallway.
She stopped in the doorway to Jean’s room. Estella stood sobbing beside a writing bureau, her face buried in her hands. A broken cup lay at her feet. She looked up as Amanda entered.
‘She’s….’ Her voice trailed off.
Amanda couldn’t understand her, but she noticed the stricken woman staring towards the ensuite bathroom, its door half-open.
Heart hammering, she pushed the door open as far as it would go.
‘No,’ she gasped. ‘No.’
Jean was sprawled on the tiled floor, her eyes open, staring at nothing, her mouth agape as if wanting to say one last word. Her blue satin dressing gown had fallen open, revealing her negligee.
A sense of unreality gripped Amanda.
‘Is she?’ Amanda couldn’t say the word but she knew the answer to her question. There was no life left in her mother’s body.
A toothbrush lay beside Jean’s outstretched fingers. Amanda stared hard at them, wanting them to curl around the handle, to show some small sign of life.
Finally, she moved her gaze to the marble vanity. There lay the mundane necessities of the living—a half-drunk glass of water, an open bottle of mouthwash, toothpaste, an open bottle of pills, perfume, lipstick and a compact.
The blue dressing gown…
Was it still a dream…her dream? She opened her mouth to scream but no sound came out. The sound of water cascading from the faucet echoed through her thoughts.
The scene swam out of focus. Her head felt light, and the room seemed suddenly darker. She could smell the soft scent of wildflowers and sandalwood as she felt herself sink to the floor.
Garry Dalrymple has to be commended for all his hard work behind the scenes for this convention.
Here's part of the chapter I read out. Please note: Amanda Blake is the main character. Dorian - her newly discovered step-brother, Brian - her newly discovered twin and Jean - her newly discovered natural mother.
Excerpt from Chapter Four of The Deadly Caress
Amanda zipped up her raspberry-colored dress, and then stepped into her sandals, her thoughts centered on Dorian’s argument with Jean last night.
She recalled her mother’s words before Dorian strode away. ‘I’m sorry. I was going to tell you.’
Still wounded by Jean’s confession that she hadn’t been able to tell Murray she’d had twins, Amanda pulled aside the silk drapes, and the weak morning sun streamed in.
More than half of last night, she’d mulled over how it must have been for Jean faced with that decision. How could she begin to understand when she’d never had children?
That she blamed herself for the loss of her own unborn child at the age of twenty had been more than enough guilt for her to carry. It had been a horrific way to wake up to what she was doing to her body and start eating properly again.
From her bedroom, she could see a path curving from the veranda, past a winding narrow garden of mauve irises and white lilies; and at the cliff face, steps that disappeared downwards to the beach. Near the steps grew two Cypress pines that clung precariously to the rocky cliff face and leaned towards the restless, churning, water.
Even after last night’s incident, and the conflicting emotions that had brought her here, she was glad she’d come and been given the chance to meet her twin. Being part of a family again made her feel whole. She opened the window and heard the ocean crashing angrily against the rocks and the wind wooing as it skidded past the house.
No matter what the weather brought, she was looking forward to spending time with Brian.
A glance at the clock told her it was seven-thirty. She picked up her earrings from the French provincial dresser, had pushed one hoop in her lobe when she heard a scream.
The woman screamed again. Amanda opened the door and hurried toward the sound, which seemed to be coming from a room at the far end of the hallway.
She stopped in the doorway to Jean’s room. Estella stood sobbing beside a writing bureau, her face buried in her hands. A broken cup lay at her feet. She looked up as Amanda entered.
‘She’s….’ Her voice trailed off.
Amanda couldn’t understand her, but she noticed the stricken woman staring towards the ensuite bathroom, its door half-open.
Heart hammering, she pushed the door open as far as it would go.
‘No,’ she gasped. ‘No.’
Jean was sprawled on the tiled floor, her eyes open, staring at nothing, her mouth agape as if wanting to say one last word. Her blue satin dressing gown had fallen open, revealing her negligee.
A sense of unreality gripped Amanda.
‘Is she?’ Amanda couldn’t say the word but she knew the answer to her question. There was no life left in her mother’s body.
A toothbrush lay beside Jean’s outstretched fingers. Amanda stared hard at them, wanting them to curl around the handle, to show some small sign of life.
Finally, she moved her gaze to the marble vanity. There lay the mundane necessities of the living—a half-drunk glass of water, an open bottle of mouthwash, toothpaste, an open bottle of pills, perfume, lipstick and a compact.
The blue dressing gown…
Was it still a dream…her dream? She opened her mouth to scream but no sound came out. The sound of water cascading from the faucet echoed through her thoughts.
The scene swam out of focus. Her head felt light, and the room seemed suddenly darker. She could smell the soft scent of wildflowers and sandalwood as she felt herself sink to the floor.
Wednesday, December 3, 2014
I'm excited. I've been featured on the NSW Writer's Centre Blog.
http://www.nswwc.org.au/2014/11/spotlight-on%E2%80%A6-o-n-stefan/
http://www.nswwc.org.au/2014/11/spotlight-on%E2%80%A6-o-n-stefan/
Friday, August 8, 2014
Author interview
Tell me a little bit about yourself, O. Stefan. What
do you do for a living? What part of the world do you live in? How long have
you been writing? That sort of thing.
Tell me a little about The Deadly Caress.
The Deadly
Caress is a fast-paced story set in California .
Suspenseful and thrilling, it is holds a mystery that Amanda Blake, a freelance
photographer, must unravel.
Amanda tracks down her birth mother, the multi millionaire Jean Campbell. Hours after her arrival, Jean is murdered.
Amanda sets out to discover her mother’s killer. Her quest takes toAustralia to
find the man she thinks holds the answer to the killer’s identity. While
visiting this man, she has to run for her life under a hail of bullets. Someone
will stop at nothing until she is dead. If she thought things were bad enough,
they are about to get much worse.
Amanda tracks down her birth mother, the multi millionaire Jean Campbell. Hours after her arrival, Jean is murdered.
Amanda sets out to discover her mother’s killer. Her quest takes to
What was the genesis of that work?
It's what
captured my attention at one time from a newspaper article and it started me
thinking...what if a person was to discover that the woman she thought was her
mother wasn't. How would she feel? What if this mother was murdered? What would
this person do?
Then there's a scary scene with Amanda driving down a mountainside and that comes from my memory banks. I grew up across the road from a very bad intersection and every weekend there would be at least one horrific accident. Some of these were youths speeding and chasing each other. Drunks and careless or not drivers who had miscalculated the sharp turn and careened into an oncoming car or the nearby light post. My dad would run over to see if an ambulance was needed, as we were the only family in the street to have a phone. He'd take blankets over if the person/people was badly injured and I would help him. My sister and my mother would be too upset to be of help and didn't go.
I find my characters everywhere and nowhere.
Then there's a scary scene with Amanda driving down a mountainside and that comes from my memory banks. I grew up across the road from a very bad intersection and every weekend there would be at least one horrific accident. Some of these were youths speeding and chasing each other. Drunks and careless or not drivers who had miscalculated the sharp turn and careened into an oncoming car or the nearby light post. My dad would run over to see if an ambulance was needed, as we were the only family in the street to have a phone. He'd take blankets over if the person/people was badly injured and I would help him. My sister and my mother would be too upset to be of help and didn't go.
I find my characters everywhere and nowhere.
I was intrigued by how you go from the female
protagonist's viewpoint to the creeper's viewpoint. Can you tell us something
about the process you follow to accomplish that?
I did get
upset when I had to put Amanda in difficult situations, as I’d grown fond of
her. I find writing about the evil people easier than writing about someone
who’s good because it’s harder to make the honest person shine but it does make
you grow as a writer.
Did this project take a lot of research?
The Deadly
Caress took a fair amount of research into police procedures and the prison
system. I emailed a detective in Monterey
who was very helpful. And for what it was like inside the prison system in the
US, I did all my research online by reading blogs from prisoners, to online
diagrams of layouts inside and articles posted online from newspapers.
What are your plans for the book in the near future?
I self published
“The Deadly Caress” early this year. Currently, I’m working on polishing my
next thriller “Lurking in the Shadows” which is scheduled for release in the
latter part of this year.
Your art work is striking. Who did the cover for you?
I found a
graphic designer on fiverr.com to design the cover for me. I’d researched the
covers I liked so that made it easier for the designer.
Link: The Deadly Caress
Web site: http://onstefan.weebly.com
Monday, August 4, 2014
Wise truths
I came across this while surfing the internet when I should have been writing. I'll share it below...
19 Incredible Wise Truths as told by Mark
Since first appearing in 1924, Winnie the Pooh has innocently stumbled through the Hundred Acre Wood, leading friends and readers on curious and memorable adventures. The lovable bear is the brainchild of A.A. Milne, inspired by his son, Christopher Robin, and his toys. While Pooh is often seen as a bit dopey and soft-spoken, his humbleness has lead to incredibly profound wisdom over the years. This is only a fraction of the inspiring words the story left us. Yet, it’s plenty to live by.
Piglet: “How do you spell 'love'?" Pooh: "You don't spell it...you feel it."
2. "You are braver than you believe. Stronger than you seem. And smarter than you think." 3. “The things that make me different are the things that make me.”
4. "If the person you are talking to does not appear to be listening, be patient. It may simply be that he has a small piece of fluff in this ear." 5. “If there ever comes a day when we can’t be together keep me in your heart. I’ll stay there forever.”
6. "As soon as I saw you, I knew an adventure was going to happen." 7. “Sometimes the smallest things take the most room in your heart.”
8. "Some people care too much. I think it's called love." 9. “Rivers know this: there is no hurry. We shall get there some day.”
10. “If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day so I never have to live without you.”
11. Weeds are flowers, too, once you get to know them." 12. “I think we dream so we don’t have to be apart for so long. If we’re in each other’s dreams, we can be together all the time.” 13. “You can't stay in your corner of the Forest waiting for others to come to you. You have to go to them sometimes.” 14. “Promise me you'll never forget me because if I thought you would, I'd never leave.” 15. “A little consideration, a little thought for others, makes all the difference.” 16. “A day without a friend is like a pot without a single drop of honey left inside.” 17. “Love is taking a few steps backward, maybe even more… to give way to the happiness of the person you love.”
Thank you Pooh. This wisdom is everlasting.
http://news.distractify.com/culture/winnie-the-pooh/?v=1
19 Incredible Wise Truths as told by Mark
Since first appearing in 1924, Winnie the Pooh has innocently stumbled through the Hundred Acre Wood, leading friends and readers on curious and memorable adventures. The lovable bear is the brainchild of A.A. Milne, inspired by his son, Christopher Robin, and his toys. While Pooh is often seen as a bit dopey and soft-spoken, his humbleness has lead to incredibly profound wisdom over the years. This is only a fraction of the inspiring words the story left us. Yet, it’s plenty to live by.
Piglet: “How do you spell 'love'?" Pooh: "You don't spell it...you feel it."
10. “If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day so I never have to live without you.”
11. Weeds are flowers, too, once you get to know them." 12. “I think we dream so we don’t have to be apart for so long. If we’re in each other’s dreams, we can be together all the time.” 13. “You can't stay in your corner of the Forest waiting for others to come to you. You have to go to them sometimes.” 14. “Promise me you'll never forget me because if I thought you would, I'd never leave.” 15. “A little consideration, a little thought for others, makes all the difference.” 16. “A day without a friend is like a pot without a single drop of honey left inside.” 17. “Love is taking a few steps backward, maybe even more… to give way to the happiness of the person you love.”
18. “A day spent with you is my favourite day. So today is my new favourite day.”
19. “How lucky am I to have something that makes saying goodbye so hard.”
Thank you Pooh. This wisdom is everlasting.
http://news.distractify.com/culture/winnie-the-pooh/?v=1
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